"As if it" -> 'it' is not needed hereEbon Range (2, 3 Tempest Straits, a Mountains, Neighborhood: Highland People's Defense Zone)
Description
You are standing inside of Ebon Range. The cave is dark, with the drip of water and a rhythm of wind that sounds almost like breathing. The interior of the cave is small and easily explored, but you feel a sense of unease - as if it something might come out of a hole you cannot see at any moment. The area is dark, though moonlight and faint city light shines through the windows.
The Typo Thread
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SharkyNebula
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Re: The Typo Thread
Re: The Typo Thread
Frozen Greaves should be either „a pair of“ or loose the „a“ in the personal description, as in „wearing Frozen Greaves“.
a pink cocker spaniel, really an oddly colored canine
a scrawny kid in a hero costume, making a difference
Brother Fugue, hard to recall even on a good day
Opher Foxaches, malarky done right
Quinn Tessance, an outlaw with a touch of whimsy
the Butch West India Company man, real gentlemen never go out of style
a scrawny kid in a hero costume, making a difference
Brother Fugue, hard to recall even on a good day
Opher Foxaches, malarky done right
Quinn Tessance, an outlaw with a touch of whimsy
the Butch West India Company man, real gentlemen never go out of style
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SharkyNebula
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- Joined: Wed Nov 24, 2021 3:00 am
Re: The Typo Thread
wickeness -> wickednessYou attack Annie Baker with your Doomstrike and hit for 19 points of unholy damage. A Chain Gremlin responded to the wickeness contained in your attack! This attack was charged with unholy hellfire! This attack drained 2 MP from them and granted them to you! You gain 19 XP. (2026-01-01 08:26:49)